TAM136 | Leox9 a écrit :
vous-pouvez lire et corriger mes fautes si j'en ai .. c'est une rédaction de mes vacances.
During my holidays, in first I did my homeworks. After, the first Monday I went to my old friend's home. His parents had a japanese restaurant, so I helped to work, it was very funny and interesting. During the free time, when the restaurant was closed, my friends who had three computers and I took my laptop computer, I felt very happy because we played together the same game. I went in a shop where everything cost less than one euro I bought a lot of things like candy, postcard.... .
When I helped them, my tasks were to clean and set the tables, there were a lot of tables about one hundred, it was very difficult. But after the work I can eat a lot of japanese's food,
it was delicious. One day i felt than it very difficult because the restaurant was full and i was alone and i had to watch the buffet because my friends were very occupied. An other day when i was working i must make a pitcher of cold water but i prepared a pitcher of hot water.
I was so embarrassed.
So, to conclude this holidays were very interesting because it was the first time than I worked in restaurant, and today I am very happy to have seen again my friends.
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During my holidays, in first I did my homeworks.
During my holidays, I did first my homework
After, the first Monday I went to my old friend's home.
After, the first Monday I visited my old friend: je trouve que tu utilises un peu trop le went
His parents had a japanese restaurant,
His parents have a japanese restaurant: ils l’ont toujours le restau, je suppose
so I helped to work,
it was very funny and interesting.
During the free time, when the restaurant was closed,
my friends who had three computers and I took my laptop computer,
Mes amis qui avaient trois ordinateurs et j'ai pris mon ordinateur portable?
Ça n’a aucun sens aussi bien en français qu’en anglais.
As I had my laptop, my friends and I played with our computers
I felt very happy because we played
together the same game.
I went in a shop where everything cost[|b]s[/b] less than one euro I bought
a lot of things like candy, postcard.... . I bought a lot of things like candies, postcards.... .
When I helped them, my tasks were to clean and set the tables,
My tasks were to clean and to lay tables
there were a lot of tables about one hundred,
it was was very difficult.
But after the work I can eat a lot of japanese's food, But after the work I could eat a lot of food: repetition, on sait qu’il s’agit de bouffe japonaise
it was delicious.
One day i felt than
it very difficultbecause the restaurant was full and i was
alone and i had to watch the buffet
Que veux-tu dire par watch:surveiller, faire attention….? Watch veut dire regarder sauf dans l’expression idiomatique watch out!
because my friends were very occupied.
An other day when i was working i must make a pitcher of cold water
[b]i had to make: concordance des temps
but i prepared a pitcher of hot water. I was so embarrassed. So, to conclude this holidays were very interesting because
it was the first time than I worked in restaurant,
and today I am very happy to have seen again my friends.
Message édité par TAM136 le 27-04-2009 à 07:36:39
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