Bonjour !
Voilà, je dois rendre un devoir d'anglais pour la rentrée, et j'aimerais si possible que vous relisiez ce que j'ai fait, et que vous me corrigiez.
Merci à tous ceux qui répondront
Voilà le texte :
"These days, the music has taken an important place in the teenagers life. Young people listen music at home, in bus, at school
But music hasnt same meaning for two different persons.
When someone says music, each think at a particular type of music (jazz, rock, techno
). Yet, the word music gathers all types. I think many people arent enough open-minded, and dont try to know other types of music. Its a pity. Each music has its characteristics. Each music has something than others dont have. To refuse to listen to other types of music, its to prevent oneself discovering and liking new things. A music can be to like, whereas it wasnt it at the beginning. I heard a story: a man only listened jazz, and a woman only rock. The man didnt like rock and the woman didnt like jazz. They were married and now, the woman love jazz and the man love rock. That proves that more you listening a musical style, more you like it.
For much, music is just to listen, whereas music is also to sing, to dance, to play
The majority of people listen music just to occupy and relax oneself. But music is a profound thing. Its something we have in us, which makes us to dream, to dance
Everybody can move on music, everybody can mark the rhythm with the foot. I think music is marvellous, because we neednt nothing to create it. Our two hands are enough to create a rhythm, our voice is enough to create a melody. It exists since the night of times and I think itll be able to never disappear.
Music is always present. It mark the time of fetes. Perhaps music has a different meaning for each person, but if one thing is sure, its it can to bring together opposing people and to create strong links."
