j'ai un devoir d'anglais à rendre mais je sais que je fais pas mal de fautes. J'aimerai savoir si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à me le corriger !!
merci pour votre aide .
 
Following your last fax, I raised some discords.
First of all, we ordered 12 tables and not 15 as marked in the fax.
Then, we wanted white and nonbeige plastic cushions.
Then, with regard to the delivery date, on Tuesday 20 to 10hours we will agree.  
finally, we had agreed for a discount of 10% (while on your fax, us evoked a discount of 5%) by hoping that these problems will as fast as possible be solved, we wish you a pleasant day.
PS: do not hesitate to contact me to the 0547688976547 for the confirmation of this order.
 
Hello, M.Starck?
Yes, it is well that.
Mrs B of company DFC, I you call following your fax. I excuse myself minor problems first of all.
yes, I listen to you.
with regard to the number of table i.e. 12 tables, we enregisté your request well. You are of agreement?
yes it is well that. 12 tables and 48 chairs of white colors, it is what you noted.
yes, I rectified the error and I also took notes the delivery date of it: on Tuesday March 20 with 10:00? isn't this?
yes, exactly. a person will be present to take delivery of them between 10:00 and 12:00
of agreement, thank you. in connection with the discount I do not have the memory to have agreed on a percentage of 10%. in our preceding faxes, we had concluded a discount from 10% if I paid the cash.
I am really sorry but I checked before our call and it is well question of 5%.
 am really not on knowing that several errors already took place….
I can propose a rate of 7% to you
yes, but my company was based on 10% and our budget for this seminar is buckled.
exeptionnellement with the encountered problems I grant the 10% to you.
You very took notes this time of them???
yes, you do not worry.  
and well thank you and good day.
thank you with you.
 

Tu cèdes facilement les 10% toi

Voilà, 10€ merci,  

merci beaucoup !!!
bonne soirée